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Reviewer requests
From Clinton:
'Just wanted to touch base and let you know we got our reviewer feedback for the Serratia paper. The reviewers were happy with the paper and gave favourable responses, they have however requested certain amendments before they accept, for publication. Are you able to assist with these before year end?
There are several comments that we need to address and mostly around the genomics. I’ve made a list of things we can do to address the comments with the least amount of work, killing multiple birds with a single change I’m hoping. Not sure if you will have time to do this before you go on leave, but anything you can assist with would be great for Amanda to work on while I’m away from the 9th December.
- Can we provide genetic context for the contigs which contained resistance genes. The reviewers want more information on what other genes are present on the contigs which contained resistance genes. Perhaps they are on a plasmid or integron with IS elements, or a resistance cluster etc. Is there an easy way to see what other genes are on each contig with a resistance gene identified? We could perhaps narrow this to the beta-lactamase genes/contigs only (TEM_1D, KPC_1, DHA, OXA_1, CTXM_1, SRT_SST, OXA_48, OXA_181, CMY), which is the focus of this paper.'
- The reviewers would like an indication of the number of SNP differences between isolates. This is a bit odd, as the dendrogram is a representation of that. Could you perhaps provide a table of the count of SNP differences between isolates, and perhaps include a ruler on the dendrogram to indicate SNP difference length. I think we did this for the Pseudomonas paper.
- For the Full_results figure attached could you please remove the virulence genes (pink) and only have the AMR genes and plasmids. The reviewers would also like to see the gene names more clearly, so if you could adjust spacing, or if its less cramped once the other genes are removed, that would be perfect. The reviewers are also not happy with us calling the control strains “controls” and would prefer we call them Contemporary, if you could please rename those in the legend on this figure. So, isolate 24 would then have to be the same colour as the other Contemporary strains (20, 21, 22).
- Similarly for the Assembly figure attached here, please rename Control to Contemporary, and make isolate 24 the same colour as 20, 21, 22.
- One of the tricker comments is why 2 of the resistant isolates did not have carbapenemase genes detected (6-2 has OXA-1, which doesn’t always confer resistance, so we can explain that one), but 25 has no carbapenemase genes detected. This is not uncommon, as they can be resistant due to other mechanisms, but there is one other gene (bla-SME) which is uncommonly identified, but occurs in Serratia, and probably not in the database we used. Is it possible to screen all the isolates for the presence of this gene, I know it’s not advisable to map to short fragments or individual genes, but it’s been done in the attached paper, and we can just cite them? They did the analysis below. Can we map to these 3 accession numbers and see if any isolates have this genomic island (SmarGI1-1), and if so, how many SNP differences there are?
Short-read WGS data were mapped against SME-associated S. marcescens genomic island SmarGI1-1 sequences.3 This revealed that the SmarGI1-1 and flanking regions of isolate 1 were identical to GenBank accession number KF615855, in isolate 4 differ from KF445086 by 8 SNPs and in isolate 5 differ from KF615855 by 53 SNPs.
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